You have recently noticed and increase in traffic in your residential area. Write a letter to the responsible person at the local council to inform him about the problem and say - Introduce yourself and describe the problem - What are the reasons for the traffic in your view - Suggest a solution to the problem.

Dear Sir, Hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and
best
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of spirits. My name is Rushi Patel and I'm writing to let you know about the traffic issue which
me
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and other local residences are facing in our residential area. Let me explain my situation, due to the recent construction of shopping mall creates
huge
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problem for the local people in travelling in
busy
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time. Because of the mall mostly people are coming here and parks their vehicles everywhere and
this
thing causes
a parking problems
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parking problems
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for the residences as well. Due to the traffic noise and sound pollution rapidly increased in
last
few months. Would you kindly, look
in to
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this
metter
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matter
and it will really
helpful
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if you
provides
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extra parking space for visitors and
also
increase the width of the road. So people can easily travel during
rush
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the rush
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period without any
hurdel
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hurdle
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. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, RUSHI
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