You have recently noticed and increase in traffic in your residential area. Write a letter to the responsible person at the local council to inform him about the problem and say - Introduce yourself and describe the problem - What are the reasons for the traffic in your view - Suggest a solution to the problem.

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Dear Sir, Hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and

best

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of spirits. My name is Rushi Patel and I'm writing to let you know about the traffic issue which

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and other local residences are facing in our residential area. Let me explain my situation, due to the recent construction of shopping mall creates

huge

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a huge

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problem for the local people in travelling in

busy

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a busy

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time. Because of the mall mostly people are coming here and parks their vehicles everywhere and

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thing causes

a parking problems

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parking problems

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for the residences as well. Due to the traffic noise and sound pollution rapidly increased in

last

few months. Would you kindly, look

in to

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this

metter

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matter

and it will really

helpful

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if you

provides

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extra parking space for visitors and

also

increase the width of the road. So people can easily travel during

rush

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the rush

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period without any

hurdel

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hurdle

hurdles

. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, RUSHI

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155 words

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