You have recently noticed and increase in traffic in your residential area. Write a letter to the responsible person at the local council to inform him about the problem and say - Introduce yourself and describe the problem - What are the reasons for the traffic in your view - Suggest a solution to the problem.

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Dear Sir, Hope

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letter finds you in radiant health and

best

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of spirits. My name is Rushi Patel and I'm writing to let you know about the traffic issue which

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and other local residences are facing in our residential area. Let me explain my situation, due to the recent construction of shopping mall creates

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problem for the local people in travelling in

busy

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time. Because of the mall mostly people are coming here and parks their vehicles everywhere and

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thing causes

a parking problems

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parking problems

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for the residences as well. Due to the traffic noise and sound pollution rapidly increased in

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few months. Would you kindly, look

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metter

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matter

and it will really

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if you

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extra parking space for visitors and

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increase the width of the road. So people can easily travel during

rush

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the rush

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period without any

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hurdle

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. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, RUSHI

rushipatel1953Thu Oct 22 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

155 words

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