Write a letter to a foreign friend who has asked if they can stay with you when visiting your country. Include Why you do not have time to host them An alternate date Recommendations for what to do

#friend #country #time #host #date #recommendations

Dear Mike, I am so glad to hear from you and your visit to my country

month. Unfortunately, I won’t be able to provide you with accommodation in my apartment because I’ve started the renovation of the flat and I’m planning to completely rebuild it.

That is

why I will be fully occupied with it, especially taking into account that my boss gives me only a few days off in order to settle all the details with a contractor. Meanwhile, I would like

you

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apply

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to invite you to spend time with my family and me in December during the Christmas holidays. I will cook a turkey and my husband will make a homemade mulled wine with cinnamon, oranges, and mulled spices. I am sure you would like our celebration meal.

In addition

, the renovation will be over until the holidays and you will be our

first

guest after it.

Nevertheless

, you are already coming in August and I suggest you stay in a mountain resort called “Chymbulak”. As I remember, you are keen on hiking and it will be very convenient for you to explore our mountains from that place. It is unbelievable, but from that location, it is possible to complete one day hike to

“Tuuksu”

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the “Tuuksu”

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glacier, “Gorelnik” waterfall, “

Mametov

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Mamedov

” lake, or other quite picturesque routes. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Take care, Maria

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

230 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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