Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre-school age. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many parents believe that taking

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of children is better left in the hands of

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services than in the trust of their own relatives.

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, children can enhance both brain development and interpersonal skills but in my opinion, for health reason, it is better to leave the children in the

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of family members. I will discuss the reasons for

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in detail in the following essay. Leaving children at

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can be of benefit for a

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's intellectual and interpersonal development.

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is due to the fact that most

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providers

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set of knowledge and skills about children's progression that they have studied beforehand. They can facilitate activities and play that are stimulating for children's brain in order for them to think smart.

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, these fun activities, which often in the form of play, are shared with other kids, which in turn can teach them ways how to deal with other people that are essential in improving their interaction skills.

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, according to studies, those children that were exposed to early school set-up with their age group were reported to have higher IQ that

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them in best universities, and a higher EQ that

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them to establish

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elationship with ease in their adult years.

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of common diseases will be greatly avoided if children

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at home with a family member. The children will not be in contact with other children who might have communicable diseases that could give them harm effects.

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, places are closed due to

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pandemic because there is a greater chance of contracting it in a space where there will be close contacts

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facilities for children. Health should be of priority because a failing body is of no use for increasing IQ or EQ. In conclusion, in my perspective, developing knowledge and skills can be the key benefits of placing children in

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institutions.

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, it is best if a member of the family will look out for them in order for them to be away from a place where there is a high risk of contracting health problems.