Some systems require students to specialize in a limited range of subjects from the age of fifteen. Other systems require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of these two education systems and which is better?

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Some educational systems give to their students an opportunity to choose a certain range of subjects
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the age of fifteen in which they will want to specialize. Others have a fixed school curriculum for everyone. In
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topic. Variable school curriculum can be considered as a better option if only pupils have
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ertain understanding of whom they want to become. Only in
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case, the main advantage of
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study approach is based on the fact that students have a chance to get a deeper knowledge in chosen subjects.
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, some people from their childhood want to become a doctor, so it is better for them to pay more attention
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chemistry and biology than on economics and history.
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, due to the mentioned way of study, students will know more and be almost ready specialists in the chosen field.
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, another existed system
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has its pros.
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of all, due to a big variety of taught subjects, students will be more developed and have a broader worldview, a wide area of thought.
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, it will be easier for people to make friends as they will be able to hold a conversation with strangers on different topics,
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, in parties or conference.
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ixed educational system lets students
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have
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in any science and various skills. It will help people to be flexible in the future and to change their major at any time.
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, a designer will be able to become an economist, if he or she had
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strong math at school.
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a fixed set of subjects has its own positive sides. To sum up, both systems have pluses.
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, I strongly believe that the
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, fixed one, is better as it helps people to become more universal employees and to be ready for different world crises.
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