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In some countries, it is common for women to participate in the workforce when their children are young. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

#countries #women #workforce #children
In the current era ,
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oman has become the centre of attraction in every walk of life. Especially, in driving the workforce of the
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reputed
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 the cost of living is increasing year by year gradually, women started working when their kids are
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 to manage themselves. In
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the pros and cons of
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working women. On the one hand, there are many benefits when females are given an
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opportunity
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work
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Firstly
 , men who are usually the
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 of the family are not able to meet the households with
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ingle income and are encouraging their girl partners to
work
. Women are finding it easy to go for a job when their children are able to manage themselves.
For example
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it is increasingly becoming difficult for the families having kids to meet
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 daily needs.
Hence
, companies like IBM
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 encouraged women to
work
 from home
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 and they moved up to the ladder just because of the fact that they were encouraged to
work
 when their younger ones are attending the school.
Secondly
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self confidence
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 and can help in raising their kids to meet the social expectations of
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society. Overall , we can say that girl power helps in boosting the economy as well
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the families.
On the other hand
 , kids miss their mothers as they are not
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available
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working women
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 to manage both office and home equally , health issues slowly starts physically as well as mentally.
Moreover
 , kids get attracted to bad friendships as they miss the supervision of their elders. To conclude ,
this
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • workforce
  • economic benefits
  • standard of living
  • professional growth
  • career progression
  • social network
  • emotional support
  • role modeling
  • work-life balance
  • childcare costs
  • external childcare
  • additional income
  • emotional development
  • career opportunities
  • part-time roles
  • less demanding positions
  • juggling responsibilities
  • family environment
  • job satisfaction
  • financial security
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