In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that cigarette is not legal in social areas at the moment in lots of countries and a

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of people think that reduces using

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igarette.I completely disagree with

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of thinking about

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discussion.

First

of all,there

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a

lot

of

area

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to

smoke

so you don'

t

ban

this

acting.

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,there are lots of response when we see various problems.We can solve

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problems all of

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ime.

For example

, ı can

smoke

in my garden,in my balcony and my house exactly.Perhaps, ı can

smoke

when ı go to anywhere

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walking.Nobody doesn'

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ban

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me in these places.I can do whatever ı want. I can produce

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esponse to solve a problem

Secondly

, people sometimes

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a cigarette illegal area because polices can'

t

observe every time.

On the other hand

,there are not enough polices and People don'

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suit those rules everywhere.

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, a policeman sometimes

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not

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good job

.It is

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embarrassed

acting

Finally

, Smoking is behaviour that repeat and repeat

thus

a person can'

t

cut down smoking suddenly.It is very difficult because Nobody doesn'

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refuse their behaviour.When the person

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get sicked that never refuse

smoking

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.If you access that cut down smoking you can be

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ero for me In

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conclusion

,using harmful materials are not now ruler in crowded areas in your country and many people believe that

such

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dvantage but the are a

lot

of place to

smoke

and there are a

lot

of reasons by my argument.

This

situation can'

t

cut down so

this

argument is totally false.