Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?

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These days, buying ready-made

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rather than cooking at home is becoming more

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by many individuals. In

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phenomenon as well as the benefits and drawbacks involved. On the one hand, there are some reasons why ready-made

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preferable choice for many people nowadays. The

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one is that some of them might be so busy with their work that they prefer buying ready-made

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, which does not require as much

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and effort as preparing

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at home. Another reason is that some people lack cooking skills, even at a basic level to cook a simple meal. They, when being a child, were not encouraged to learn and practice cooking at home by their parents or attend cooking classes at school and spend more

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studying academic subjects

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, they are unable to cook and might have no choice but buy processed

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for their own.

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, the availability of already made

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can have both positive and negative effects. One certain benefit is that a lot of

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for cooking, buying

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and cleaning can be saved.

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might be extremely helpful and be of importance for busy people who can make use of

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to do other important things rather than cooking.

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, the main problem with ready-made

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in my country is that their quality is often questioned. It is difficult to determine whether the industry follows the standard of

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hygiene because of the lack of official regulation.

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, many people eating these types of

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quite often are facing health problems. In conclusion, ready-made

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can be a good option

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everyone, especially for busy individuals and those who lack cooking abilities.

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is convenient for us in today's hectic life, but

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uality of those types of

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Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?

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Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities (for example, helping at home or at work). Others believe that children should be free to enjoy their life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Historical objects in museums all over the world should be returned to their country of origin. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People living in the twenty first century generally have a better quality of life than people who lived in previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?