You are going to have a family party in a party in a private room of a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager and say - Why do you need to use this private room - What do you need them to provide for the party - Inquire about the price of the food you are ordering

Dear Sir, Hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and
best
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of spirits. My name is Rushi Patel and I'm writing to let you know that, I'm planning to celebrate my sister's birthday party in your hotel. Let me explain my situation, my sister is going
to
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abroad just after her birthday party. Due to
this
reason, I wanna book one big private room in your hotel. So
me
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and my other relatives can enjoy party
picefully
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peacefully
over
ther
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there
the
. I
also
need
a
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awasome
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awesome
decoration in the room and some speakers as well. So we can enjoy music properly. I will
also
prefer some
softdrinks
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soft drinks
over there. Would you kindly, provide me
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best price for the food, because I'm planning to order a huge
quentity
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quantity
of food. My contact number is 9099993467. In case you wanna contact me directly and
also
let me know your
avalibility
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availability
, so I can come to
finilize
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finalize
everything with you. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, RUSHI
Submitted by rushipatel1953 on

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