In many countries schools have severe problems with students behaviour. What do you think are the causes for this? What solutions can you suggest?

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Across the Globe, Schools are facing lots of problems with the students enrolled.Students are creating harsh environments for teachers.In the passage below, I will put some light on the burning problems caused by students in high school and various ways to eradicate them. Teenagers are not fully matured to judge between right and wrong.During adolescent human mind explores the environment and exploits its nature.It tends to do things which give it more rewards.Sometimes children like to break things and finds it funny.It is their novice Biological brain, which is giving them adrenaline rush when they create trouble for others.Teenagers often tend to create havoc in a class by throwing papers, playing while the teacher is teaching etc. All these actions are acts of joy to teenagers.They don't have enough sense to predict the value of doing a task. While teenagers are not fully aware of what is positive or negative, there are several ways to limit
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of them.It is very crucial, to take action and penalize them.The
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responsibility lies for the parents to keep a watch on their children
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, making sure they don't join bad company.Spending time with kids and teaching them value things, helps a lot in the development of a young mind.Separate classes on ethical
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can help a number of students together at the same time.While these are ways to overcome
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management is liable to take strict actions against violators. Though numerous books are published on children's
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and how to train them to be socially excepted, one major point these books miss is how to convince and influence them.Strict methods have worked for long to change the
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of an individual, which sadly is still practised today by a large number of population.Its high time to start behavioural training from playschools itself.
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