Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

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Nowadays, more and more students plan to
study
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in foreign countries even when they are in primary school. There are much more parents urgently want to send their children to
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overseas.
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tide has various influences on both children and society. I will state my views below. For students who
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overseas, there are some benefits
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as broadening their horizons. Studying abroad gives more opportunities to interact with other cultures and accept
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differences, which contribute to
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develop
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their different ways of thinking. Another crucial effect is that they can improve their ability
of thinking
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independently. Due to far away from their parents, they have to face
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problems and find out solutions by themselves.
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, there are some negative effects
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them. When they come back, they will feel they are not familiar with domestic career styles and relationship circles. It is difficult to integrate into
collegues
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colleagues
who
study
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in hometown for that their deep western insights can't persuade the
collegues
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colleagues
or be accepted by them. As for governments or countries, more students studying abroad not only brings about new technology and innovation insights
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but
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intrigues or pushes the
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of Chinese education patterns. We are on the way to become a giant technological country, the innovation ability got by the strongest strength of the society - the younger generation
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is the most efficient way to achieve the goal. If we want to improve our self-innovation ability, our country should pay attention to education
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, with which scramming teaching way can be changed. Students who come back from other countries are the most
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spirits to make some contribution
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education
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.
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, there are too many students who prone to other cultures plan to
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abroad very early and are willing to migrate to other countries.
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can result in
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oss of talents, who misunderstand or undervalue local cultures. To sum up,
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ncreasing number of students studying abroad can improve their horizons, and contribute to the innovation and
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of countries. Whereas, it
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about some strangeness of career path for students, as well as
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oss of talents and culture undervalues for countries.
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