Some people say that in all levels of education from primary school to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

Learning is a life-long process. There are some people who believe that every educational institution, even from the elementary to tertiary level, promotes theoretical aspects
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practical training. I strongly disagree with
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viewpoint because it is highly essential to spend a significant amount of time
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since
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prepares the students to secure better prospects.
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in
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training aspects is to provide a strong base to build practical
skills
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In other words
, without having a thorough understanding of the reasons behind every action, the growth of the learner would be limited.
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, the students are taught
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the periodical table, and
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structure of an atom, before going laboratory to see chemical reactions, knowing the fundamental aspects is crucial to
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skills
in
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subject.
Due to
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, many pedagogical experts construct syllabi to deliver a theoretical side of a subject. Another fact is that the learners are
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to enter the practicality of their syllabus since their brains
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to acquire
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in-depth knowledge.
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to learn before starting to practice them,
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is impossible until they well-worsed.
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, allowing a 10-year
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child to
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in researching a vaccine for cancer, can be futile since they are not equipped to handle
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than
skills
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practical aspect is
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I strongly believe that
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has many positives.
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allows the children to have a strong factual understanding, which is essential to develop practical
skills
. It should be suggested that children are taught the basics.
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