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Many people patronize larger industries and ignore local shops because the big firms invest a lot into promotion and marketing. What can this cause to the local shops? What can be done to make people patronize the local shops?

#people #industries #shops #firms #promotion
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industrialization
, many companies start mass production and with that large group started to making shopping malls and
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industrialization
 chain to attract people to buy things on one roof. The big firms are relying on promotion and marketing to attract people to buy their
product
. Despite local shops are focus on authenticity and honesty.
Although
, local shops are facing problems to find a loyal
customer
.
To begin
 with, big companies are introduced a membership card or reward card to stick a
customer
 into their ground.
Moreover
,
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online companies are giving a chance to the
customer
 to compare the price of the
product
 from different vendors.
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 efforts affect a local shop to sustain in
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arket. They are do not have money to invest
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 type of technologies.
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, amazon is a worldwide company, they
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 with many companies.When,
customer
 search for any
product
 while, the system automatically shows suggestion about
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imilar
product
 with price and
additionally
, they offer combo products with some discount on the
roduct
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product
products
. On another side,
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ocal shop cannot offer without
customer
 wish and
some time
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customer
 finds
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ame
product
 in less price on online.
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 type of situation, local vendors lose people trust. The local shops can start home delivery in
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ame city or near
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ity with no fee or minimum fees.
Furthermore
, local shops could start to post on social media to know people about their
product
 and life span about the
product
. The
last
 not a least, special day discount on
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roduct and give free repair or troubleshoot for a year. To recapitulate, Big firms are good standing but, all they are start with small business. The idea is to grow in the market is updated with a time and try to do
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 to improve your business and gain trust from people.
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strategies
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 gives
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pportunity to the local shop to get
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oyal
customer
 for a lifetime.
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