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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while other consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?

#countries #children #work #people #responsibility
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 in some countries
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children are working with a salary. Is
this
 a completely wrong situation or important for learning and taking responsibility? In my opinion
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children should not be a worker
moreover
 they should be just children at the
begining
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beginning
 of their lives.
First
 of all, education is one of the most important
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21th
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 century and children should have their
time
 to get educated and to do their
homeworks
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homework
.
For example
, a child who works in a paid job, even if he/she goes to work on his/her free
time
 after school, can't find a place or any
time
 to study and the chance of being an educated person has taken from that child's hands. That's why I completely disagree with the idea of children who engaged in paid work.
Secondly
, for me children must have enough
time
 for hobbies, leisure
time
 activities, playing some games with their friends etc. so that they can have the feelings of happiness, sadness, angriness etc. and how to cope with them and
also
 learn how
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e a team player with their friends.
For instance
, a boy who works, can't have
time
 for sitting on the grass, drink juice or something and talk with his friends because of worktimes and he will never know the feeling of that peaceful moment.
Thus
, working isn't an important experience for children and as a matter of fact
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it is waste of
time
. In conclusion, children should not spend their
time
 at work for having some experience or learning how to take responsibility, they should have their free
time
 for school,
homeworks
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homework
, hobbies and hanging out with friends.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Child labor
  • Exploitation
  • Minimum age
  • Work experience
  • Survival
  • Taking responsibility
  • Education
  • Poverty
  • Legal restrictions
  • Physical toll
  • Psychological impact
  • Cultural perceptions
  • International conventions
  • Economic impact
  • Work-study programs
  • Skilled labor
  • Unskilled labor
  • Developing economies
  • Moral implications
  • Professional development
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