Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more beneficial both environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Some individuals prefer to consume locally-produced foods
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of imported ones because of environmental and economic
concern
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. In my opinion, some diets are required to
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from overseas as they are healthy to have. On the one hand, various imported foodstuff gives significant health benefits. Many overseas fruits, vegetables and processed meals are filled with vitamins and good additives, which are very much necessary for humans to supply
nutritions
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in the body and maintain fitness.
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, some of these items can not be cultivated locally because of the unavailability of a suitable atmosphere and soil.
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, purchasing
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stuff from abroad can supply essential
nourishments
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to the residents.
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, avocado, which is a nutrient-dense fruit especially filled with
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good fatty
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,
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farmed in Bangladesh
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people of
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country buy it from overseas.
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, the shipment of food promotes environmental pollution and the expense
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the locals. Usually, commodities are transported from abroad by
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air, water and road;
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, more fuels are burned and
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the atmosphere
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is contaminated.
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, consuming foreign foods
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costly as the importers have to pay taxes and tariffs
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the borders; these formalities raise the price of every single imported item.
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, Bangladeshi inhabitants have to pay more than double for
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strawberry in the local market than
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the
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locally produced one.
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, diet shipments are pursued with the demands of the products;
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, there is less chance of frequent
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and unnecessary
intaken
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by the customers. In conclusion,
getting
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foodstuff
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food
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from outside
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the country is advantageous or not is a controversial issue. Some people think that
this
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trend drives climate pollution and expenditure.
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, I believe
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it is worthwhile to eat these
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the essential compounds they contain.

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task response
State a clear view in the opening and repeat it in the end. The essay should show a clear answer to the prompt.
coherence
Link ideas in a simple way. Use 'and', 'but', 'so' to show how ideas go with each other. Keep a clear order in each part.
task response
The writer tries to cover both sides of the issue.
coherence
Good use of example to show a point.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon emissions
  • transportation
  • environmentally friendly
  • economically beneficial
  • local farmers
  • local economy
  • fresher
  • nutritious
  • food security
  • imports
  • preserving
  • traditional farming practices
  • biodiversity
  • limited variety
  • availability
  • cost
  • contributor
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