Scientist have been warning for many years about protecting the enviroment and that we should limit the use of energy in our daily lives.despite these warnings many people dont do this. What are the reasons for this? how can people be encouraged to take an interest in protecting enviroment.

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It is obvious that environmental problems are big issues which people should take it seriously.
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ot only scientist but
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ituation is. Many factors may be the reason for
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nvironment is
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ecessity for taking action about environmental problems. People knowledge about
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topic is very limited. Following
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many of them are aware of it, they don’t know how to start actions.Practical solutions are not known by them.
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, especially in underdeveloped countries by mending leaky pipes, people can contribute the water conservation considerably.
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, people can decrease
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air pollution. What’s more, economical reasons make up
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high proportion of
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roblem.Because many measures which should be done to protect
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nvironment are not affordable for people.
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nvironment
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of motor cars, these cars are not reachable for a lot of people. Following
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,governments have massive responsibility
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problem.People attention should be drawn
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problem with educational channels, they should be encouraged to take measures with some incentives. Some measures should be implemented by law enforcement. In conclusion, environmental problems are not
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ovel topic which should be addressed by people and its seriousness is increasing day by day.Not only educational but
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economical reasons comprise the main drawbacks about taking actions,
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with the
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commitment, people can commence
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something about it.
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