There are many things that can motivate people to perform well in their work. These can include the salary, job satisfaction or the chance to help others. What do you feel is the best motivation to do well at work? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

It is estimated that ninety
percent
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of the world's population is depended on jobs for earning their bread. With the new startups and business ideas coming up, the opportunities for the people to get better jobs as per their choice has increased.
However
, finding
a
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right
job
is
also
challenging these days. Some people admire
better paying
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jobs while few look for
job
satisfaction; there can be various means through which employers can get their employees motivated for working harder and putting more efforts. Many
job
seekers consider
salary
as their fundamental criteria while applying for the
job
. Making more money or getting paid more than the previously drawn
salary
always intrigues the candidate. Other than that, the employee always
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for the promotion with the more capital gain than the subsequent
year
.
That is
the reason many of them perform their best and showcase extraordinary skills so that they get paid well in the upcoming
year
.
For example
, every
year
in many companies provides a
salary
hike to the employees based on the previous
year
performance assessment.
Furthermore
, the people who do not consider money as their primary criterion, look for
job
satisfaction. Research shows that the employees who were satisfied with their work were able to showcase outstanding results.
For example
, during Covid-19 situation, many of the employees were working from home and
also
had to face the
salary
cut-down. When Facebook generated a survey, they found the pay-cut did not demoralise them;
on the other hand
, they were performing increased as they were getting more time to spend with their family. In my opinion, work satisfaction is of essential criteria, as one works for one-
third
of his daily schedule, if the person does not get mental peace at his professional life, it can
also
affect his personal life.
Nevertheless
,
salary
should
also
be paid as per market standard;
moreover
, there should be perks and benefits for competing performance in the company.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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