Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, environmental problems
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one of the most serious concerns in the world,
however
, there are few people pay attention to. Many people think it belongs to the official's task and even others' responsibilities. I really think
this
is a very common phenomenon in
medern
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modern
societies, which every individual need to change and take seriously. It is
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that that numerous people think that environmental issues are far away from their own benefits and care far little about
this
.
On the other hand
, they believe that even though they do some garbage sorting, it will not have any effect on the huge task - environmental problem.
On the other hand
, they will neither
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receive
any praises for caring about the issues nor being punished by ignoring them. There is an ironic situation that everyone pays much attention to on their celebrities' marriages, but don't spend few minutes on learning about oil explosion which causes lots of damages to sea creature and even
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sea surroundings. Dealing with environmental problems, it
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whole society to strive for it, which can't be resolved
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only depending on governments or individuals. For every people. we can focus on details or minor matters to contribute to environmental
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, by which environmental problems will become less prevalent than before. If we show careless about the issue, which is a bad model example for our children, they will
also
not have the sense
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opinion, resulting
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norse situations in the future. For officials or schools, them with them, they
also
need to educate the public how
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eep relationship that environmental problems have with them and how they are influenced. Only like
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, people will show their
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and respects more. To sum up,
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anges of people show their careless about environmental issues because they don't think the problem will influence them a lot. It
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hole society to strive for, including officials and individuals.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prioritize
  • immediate needs
  • connect with
  • distant
  • abstract
  • economic considerations
  • growing awareness
  • active participation
  • initiatives
  • movements
  • impacts
  • well-being
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