Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case ? What is the most important thing to succeed in life ?

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Many people unsuccessful in
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but later on end up being successful in
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is successful in
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and happiness/satisfaction is most important
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to succeed in
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fail
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in
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have very less idea about
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in
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then
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hance to learn from my mistakes.Each
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should fail at
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some point
so that they will learn their mistake and would not repeat it again in their
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.I think people those who have failed while in
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will realise that they had
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uge mistake and to cover it they start working hard and end up being successful in
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uccessful
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.The more
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is happy the more successful he will be.
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, If a p[erson is not happy with his work he will not give his 100 % dedication towards work; but if he is
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interested
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he will give more than his full dedication.
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asic thing for being successful in
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. To summarize, failure in early age can be helpful as it will help to realize mistakes done by
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erson whereas ,happiness
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a crucial role in terms
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being succeed
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