Some people think that in order to produce a happy society, it is necessary to ensure that there is only a small difference between the earnings of the richest and the poorest. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The economical inequality is so evident in our world. There are some people

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that it is better to cap the salary of the rich, by doing

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, the residents would be happier. I do not agree with

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standpoint since

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can have severe repercussions

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the nation.

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with, to improve the standard of the economically deprived, the first and foremost step is to avail free access to education for all, irrespective of their background.

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, they would

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to secure a well-paid job.

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, another possible method is to fix the minimum wage for every employment.

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, slowly and gradually, the destitute would witness the prosperity in their lives and they feel content.

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, if the government introduces a plan to cap the salary of the affluent, could bring serious ramifications.

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is because they may feel displeasure,

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, the employee may migrate to developed nations, where they can earn handsome money without any restrictions.

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, recently, many wealthy Indian businessmen have migrated to different foreign countries, where they could get tax exemptions

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as Malta.

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, some unintentional effects can bring to

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finance

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status

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attempting to maintain the optimum standard of living for all. In conclusion, in order to minimise the

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imbalance of any country, capping

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apply

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the

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rich's

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income would be a feasible solution,

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some. In my opinion, I firmly reiterate

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hardly

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any positive outcome as

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causes dissatisfaction among the wealthy. It is highly recommended that the authority

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to find alternative solutions for the same.