Some think that economic progress is completely dependent on the country’s success, while others believe that other factors are also important. What are the different factors contributing to the success of a country? Do you believe that only one factor is important, compared to others?
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a nation's
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sucess
totally Correct your spelling
success
depend
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depends
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apply
economical
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economic
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health
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determine
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that determine
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successfulness
country
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education
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have
a huge role to play and it is more important than other Change the verb form
has
featuers
. Correct your spelling
features
country
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sucess
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success
depend
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depends
economical
progress but Replace the word
economic
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on
education
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system
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health
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system
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The nation
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well-educated
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a well-educated
people
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people
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health
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suppling
free medical services and should provide a good educational Correct your spelling
supplying
system
for young adults at Use synonyms
school
and Universities. Fix the agreement mistake
schools
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Singapore
president recently said thatChange noun form
Singapore's
,
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apply
health
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education
to their citizen is to have a stable economy. Use synonyms
Thus
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contribute
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that contribute
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sucess
of a Correct your spelling
success
country
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educational Correct article usage
a good
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medicare
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Medicare
education
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have
a huge part to play in Change the verb form
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the sucess
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of a Correct your spelling
success
country
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into
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to
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an uneducational
genaration
can Correct your spelling
generation
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more issues. to explain more, without Correct your spelling
create
a
proper schooling there will be Remove the article
apply
less
professionals in the field specailly in Change the quantifier
fewer
medical
industry.and Add an article
the medical
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hand,
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people
to Use synonyms
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be invole
invole
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involved
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in
crime
activities. Replace the word
criminal
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of the
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are invole
invole
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involve
involved
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many criminal incidents. Change preposition
in
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for
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success
country
since it can reduce Use synonyms
the
most of the problems. Correct article usage
apply
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important
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contribute
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contributing
country
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education
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medicare
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the medicare
system
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educational
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the educational
system
is more fundamental than other Use synonyms
factors
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