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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

#countries #people #salaries #country #government #control #limit #amount
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we are living in the world of competition where everybody is trying hard to achieve some goal. While doing
this
 few things matter like your passion, physical, mental health and goal. Majority of the people working hard for a
uality
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quality
 lifestyle and job satisfaction which gives great
life
 experience. It
also
improve
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 their purchasing power
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for instance
, they can travel around the world, buy anything and have a luxurious
life
. People do consider carrier to earn
a
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igher
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higher
 income. A job which gives more income obviously makes their lifestyle happier. It
also
 makes their financial side strong and improves the standard of living. A Strong financial background provides multiple opportunities in their
life
. A strong background is the backbone of
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ealthy
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healthy
wealthy
 atmosphere. They live with the mindset like they are on the top of all above.
On the other hand
, it is often seen that a high-salary career without peace of mind can make condition miserable or even worse. People can only buy materialistic happiness with money but a carrier with a good amount of
profession
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 achievement and better earnings can be much enjoyable. More salary brings more duties and responsibilities which will add more stress to their health. A passioned carrier gives them extra energy to handle
such
, type of stress.
Hence
 in my opinion only focus on higher-salary is a bad decision
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on the other hand
, only good job satisfaction will make
life
 compromising.
This
 decision is varied from person to person what to do but a proper balance between income and peace of mind certainly makes a difference.
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  • wealth inequality
  • economic growth
  • motivation
  • talent acquisition
  • consumer spending
  • tax revenue
  • redistributing wealth
  • market forces
  • income disparity
  • social stability
  • freedom of choice
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