Nowadays, many schools find it profitable to sell unhealthy food and sugary drinks to students during lunch breaks. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Needless to say, education has become a business

instead

of working for the development of the nation. Above that, the canteen run by the schools

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the cheap variety of unhealthy

food

and high sugar content drinks, which is creating a negative impact

towards

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the

health

of

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pcoming generation. The details are discussed in the below paragraphs.

To begin

with, schools in our country lacks proper infrastructure for cooking

a healthy

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healthy food

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food

in premises. Due to which, many of the packaged

food

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outsourced. As the profits are concerned, the

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hygiene

prospects of the

food

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neglected

leading

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to unhealthy processed

food

for the students.

This

could

gretaly

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greatly

impact the

health

conditions of the students; developing probability of chronic disease related to

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obesity.

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giving rise to a detrimental young population.

Moreover

, as per government norms

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the children must be provided with adequate nutritional diet during

lunch time

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lunchtime

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in schools. Corrupted system and inconsiderate school management is an obstacle to provide

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better quality

food

to the students. There has been

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ignificant rise in production of sugary drinks, which is affecting the

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younger

generation to

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consume

it by their marketing strategies. Recent reports

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a surge in

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umber of diabetic patients in the country,

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the early-age diagnoses of

this

disease

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upscalling

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upscaling

upskilling

. To sum up

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with, strick laws must be implemented

rigouressly

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rigorously

regarding the diets which are provided to the

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children

childrens

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.

Likewise

, the

health

chart must be regulated with the

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of calorie intakes and other vital vitamins, which must be paramount in the

the

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food

provided. Flouting the laws and regulation

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must face the harsh

cosequences

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consequences

,

otherwise

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the futuristic world will be in trouble managing the

health

crises due to improper diet.