You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Each and Every
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have to deal with problems of people who are leaving below
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overty line
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regions. The ruling party of the nations have their own method of tackling
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issues. Illiteracy and unemployment are two major
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for the low economic condition of individuals.
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poverty in detail.
Firstly
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ajor cause of primary poverty is illiteracy, as it is
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icious cycle, people quit their education because their parents cannot afford expenses of their studies and they end up in doing some work to meet their basic needs.
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, as they are not educated enough they face difficulties in finding
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etter job.
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oor family, most of the time could not study because of
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ow financial condition of parents, which directly
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their future, as they are deprived of getting enough opportunities to progress in life. The Government of nations could focus on free education with better facilities for poor children, at the same time they could help their parents to increase their skills by giving short courses of mobile repairing,
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,
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ainting which help them to earn for their necessities.
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, owing to globalisation, multinational companies from developed countries could start
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usiness in
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developing country which would help them to fight against unemployment. To conclude, worldwide many states doing something to eradicate the problem of poor people according to their situation and need.
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responsibility to help poor in their own way in terms of cash or kind on humanitarian ground, even many social workers gave their entire life in serving the needy.
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