Scientist and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musician and artist. To what extent do you agree/ disagree

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modern era wherein there every individual is self-determined and want to have a better career, we have few professions like scientist and Information

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geniuses who have are considered superior along with having more

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in the

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, when compared to music performers and other Artists I would completely agree with

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as

science

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and

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experts play a very important role in advancing human

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they are paid higher by the government and companies earning them more

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in the

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, Scientist and

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experts help in advancing the living standard of human.

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professionals always thrive to save human

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, provide vaccines, conduct researches for the betterment of humanity, along with assistance from

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echnology professional who

innovate

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various gadgets, machines, tools which make our

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simple on

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planet.

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, NASA an organization, which consist of both knowledgeable expertise in

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and

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wherein these geniuses work together to explore the universe and protect

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from any manmade or natural disasters. Due to which they are given

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by everyone in

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society

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as their work is for the betterment of everyone.

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expert

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paid higher in every country compared to musicians and artist which

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is a reason for more

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given to them. A better pay scale earned by them results in a higher standard of living when compared to artists and musicians who have to struggle for numerous years to be famous and earn well.

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, as per a recent survey in Delhi by Time magazine, the annual income of an IT professional was almost 60 higher than any Music jockey or rapper in the city.

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etter lifestyle is always proportionate to the

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earned in

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. In conclusion, I would agree that Professionals from

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and

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field are given more

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and appreciation by the community as they help in advancing and saving human

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and they have a better lifestyle due to high income. *Additional BP2*

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,

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and technical experts are considered to be smarter by

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society

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when compared to any performing artist. As we know being a

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or

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expert requires years of studying,

practicing

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and gaining knowledge which is always respected in every country whereas many people think that artist and music professional are taking a shortcut to be successful in

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. to per a recent survey done by DNA newspaper in new Delhi school, 68% of

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parents wanted their kids to be doctors or engineers, which clearly depicts the profession they support and

respect

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