Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

without any doubts

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we can say that our world is facing a severe issue of environmental degradation as each day pass by.Some

of

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p

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eople believe that

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xtinction of

species

is the main reason behind the problem while others

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the fact that there are more important environmental problems.

Firstly

in order to support the former argument

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there are numerous reasons.The loss of a particular animal and plant

species

could make an of impact in the ecological balance.Several aspects like deforestation and climatic change

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a crucial role

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this

subject. Cutting down the forest makes a particular

species

homeless and following

this

reason many of them dare to come to the cities and streets in search of food and shelter.

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there are several Hunters behind some rare

species

in order to make use of it as an export commodity In

such

cases the government must be well aware and must take strict initiatives against

such

practices.

On the contrary

,I

also

support the view that there are more important environmental issues. Global warming is one

such

problem which is led by the combustion of fossil fuels and greenhouse gases.

This

may affect everyone's lives.

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to it

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unfavourable climatic conditions may affect the ecosystem badly that survival becomes more difficult. It is seen that many organisations around the world are putting their efforts to protect

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nvironment.Several national parks and botanical gardens

contributes

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a major half in ensuring the safety of each

organisms

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and other individual initiatives like planting trees can

also

be put forward to improve

such

problem. In conclusion, as the guardian of nature

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it is the responsibility of every single person in the world to consider

this

as a serious issue and look forward

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a better environment.