Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to cinema hall. Others believe that to be fully enjoyed, films needs to be seen in cinema. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

In today’s busy world,
cinema
is a platform to entertain people.
However
, some people prefer to see films on available digital platforms while others believe that watching films in a
cinema
gives an authentic experience.
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raditional method of watching
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ilm is preferable. With
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technological evolution, most people have started using digital resources.
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inema industry
also
has begun with releasing films on online platforms.
Therefore
, people are enjoying movies on their devices because it saves time and money. In metro cities, it takes
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ood amount of time to reach
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due to traffic problems.
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icket price is
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example, research in India says that, over the past 3 years,
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ovie ticket price has been increased by 50%. Because of all these reasons, some people choose to watch
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ovie on digital devices.
Cinema
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enjoyment. Most people strongly claim that the beauty of
cinema
can only be experienced on big screens. Even with the plan of enjoying films
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, one can
also
get quality time to spend with family. In
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, advance sound and
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visual effects
visual-effects
are used so that one can have
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leasant viewing experience.
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eel of real visual effects, action films are released with 3D effects.
Hence
, people still prefer to watch films on a big screen.
Cinema
is popular amongst all the generations and different age groups.
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some people enjoy films on mobiles or desktops, some still prefer traditional way
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of watching
them on giant cinemas.
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of views but in my opinion
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watching films in a
cinema
is ultimately superior.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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