Indeed, economic growth
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enormous nations
to perfectChange preposition
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citizens’
quality
of life in recent decades.
While
some
people
think the important
responsibilities are losing at the same time which brings negative impacts to the society. In my opinion, I support
people
to improve their living
quality
through
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and
this
trend brings more benefits than drawbacks.
On the one hand,
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social
values
can be better prevented after fulfilling
people
’s basic needs.
According to
Maslow’s Hierarchy of Needs, human beings have five catalogues of needs: physical, safety, love and belongings, esteem, and self-actualization. In his theory, higher needs in the hierarchy begin to emerge when
people
feel they have sufficiently satisfied the previous need.
For example
, having social connections is related to better physical health and,
conversely
, feeling isolated has negative consequences for health and well-being.
On the contrary
, it is hard to imagine that residents of
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undeveloped country can maintain their
values
while
they are living
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poverty. To
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, the poor might have
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possibility
to commitChange preposition
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a crime
such
as robbery and thievery. As shown in the recent news, the crime rates are dramatically higher in
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unstable and
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Third World countries.
Hence
, to maintain the valued social traditions like respect, fairness and responsibility, citizens should have
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a better
quality
of life
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.
On the other hand
, it is undeniable that some communities and individuals ignored
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social
values
purposely
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massive profits illegally. In
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cases, I believe that the authorities can introduce
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fairer and
strictReplace the word
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business regulations and laws to regulate
those Correct determiner usage
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unfair
competitionsFix the agreement mistake
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and illegal commercial actions.
For example
, there are two types of rip-offs well known nowadays, which are Ponzi
Schemes
and Pyramid
Schemes
. Commonly, both
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schemes
make participants
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that they would actually earn returns from their investments. Since the facts of the
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exposures, several countries have listed these kinds of commercial products as unlawful acts.
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a result, the
lawFix the agreement mistake
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and regulations helped
people
to develop
economyAdd an article
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in a fair way to maintain
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social
values
while
improving
economyCorrect article usage
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.
In conclusion, even though there are some commercial actions betraying the social
values
for earning illegal profits. I believe that under the supervision system, the increase
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people
’s life
quality
will bring more merits to
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society, and
also
it can help to prevent valuable social qualities.