Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Over a decade or so, due to continuous growth in computer

technology

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there is a drastic increase

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its usage in people’s life regularly. Though

technology

is bringing advantage like easy learning options, it

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has some drawbacks

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ffects of people’s

health

with excessive usage of it. I believe there are more advantages of using computers in life, but aggressive usages of it could

leads

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to

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issues. To start with, due to high development in

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technology

now a days

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computers have become more advance. It is providing more options

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learning especially to students, where they can understand the subject in detail with the help of visuals and audio lectures.

For instance

,

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tudent can get help from the internet about any subject and they would do better studies or projects.

However

,

technology

is

also

having some negative effects along with its positives.

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, spending

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ong time continuously in front of a computer could

also

lead to

problem

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like straining of

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ye or dry eye. As it is providing many options

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entertainments, young people are choosing it rather than outdoor activity, which is indirectly decreasing the physical activity and their overall development. Along with that, because of unlimited

available

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of internet,

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ounger generation could get access to information or materials, which would not be suitable to them like videos of

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angerous activity or get involved into any fraud

mails

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. In conclusion, though

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vailability of computers in day to day life leading to better learning options and sharing of knowledge, there are

also

some

health related

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problems like eye strain, overweight, etc., due to its excessive usage. I believe computers have to be used only for increasing knowledge and study purpose with regular breaks and with

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ime limit so that it has very minimal effects on

health

.