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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, numerous people hold that we can't leave social media because it exists in our daily life everywhere.
However
, some people have opposite views that they
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 more risks of personal
information
 leaks caused by social
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. From where I stand, even though there are some problems brought about by social
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, their advantages play a more crucial role in our society. It is certainly the case that with social media becoming more prevalent, personal
information
 can be gained by strangers more easily. It is very common that we can receive many advertising calls from strangers who already knew about many private
informations
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 of us,
such
 as
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addresses
, the locations at that time, and our telephone numbers. There are many fraud victims,
for example
, who just clicked the link that was sent to their phones, losing a sum of money without knowing where to find crimes.
Therefore
, with the trend of private
information
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, more crim and murder incidents can happen due to aiming at objectives very precisely.
However
, if everyone pays more attention to protect their own
information
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sets up
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 passwords more
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, social media can bring about many values for our daily life. If people use websites accurately, they can know about news and
information
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, more poor people who suffer from difficulties can collect help and support, which help them walk out of
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elplessness of their
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lives
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lifes
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. Many children from poor families got incurable diseases at
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ery young age,
for example
, and they asked for help and told the truth to
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ublic by social media, which contributes to
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 their lives. Social media is a very good way to transfer love and offer help to others all over the world. So did the same situation during the
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pandemic
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 and denoted goods and materials to disaster areas. I strongly think these are the power of mass
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 to connect people from different places
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 to resolve and face problems together. To sum up, with the popularity of social
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, some problems appeared
such
 as private
information
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 to spread love and support to others is the
unprecedent
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unprecedented
 value of them, which need to be used and improved widely.
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