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You have a neighbour wh is often burning rubbish at their house. Write a complaint about it to the local council and say a). What is happening b). How is your family harmed by this c). What could be the solution, in your opinion

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Dear
Mr.
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 Agrawal, I am a resident of Commonwealth
society
 in Mira road east and I am writing
this
 letter to seek your attention at one of activity that often happens in my neighbourhood and it is not only harming the eco-system of our town but
also
 has been primarily affecting the health of the members of the
society
. To bring in your notice, every other day my neighbour burns some kind of rubbish at her apartment whose dark coloured smoke spreads all over
society
 and its sharp smell makes almost everyone coughing. Since
,
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 my family lives the closest to her apartment, we have to bear most of the discomfort.
Moreover
, one of my family members has
also
 got ill due to throat infection caused by the smoke. As a member of the
society
 and one of the victim, we request you to kindly intervene in the situation. In my opinion, your team can suggest them to use the garbage disposal area located at the outskirts of the city, that way it will not affect the environment as well as
society
 residents. I look forward to hearing from you about the course of action taken in
this
 regards. Yours faithfully, Sweta Singh
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