Advertisement of snacks and toys have a great impact on children and their parents. So, the advertisements to children should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

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era, marketing ads are playing

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rucial role in making choices related to kids. Especially in

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ategory of children’s food and games,

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uardian could find innumerable ads, which are in fact having negative impacts on kids and their parent’s financial plans.

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society. I concord with the fact that lawmakers have to take

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in order to stop

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ads, which are having worse effects on the younger generation and their caretakers.

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of all, several companies producing goods related to kid’s games are trying their best to attract younger customers, as they could be their easy target for high sales. As a

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ime, their caregivers are not having any option other than buying it for their kids and later realizes that it was of no use.

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, a famous kid’s gaming company launches a new game saying it is very useful for kid’s logical building abilities, but once

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it, they came to know it was just wastage of money. It is indirectly

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the whole family’s budget planning. So, the parents have to spend wisely while buying any playing products for their children.

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, the food manufacturing industry especially for children

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spending

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uge amount in creating attractive ads for kids. They are not even considering if that

product

is good for them or not.

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, ice-cream making company markets its new

product

in the media by using celebrity kid in the advertisement

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but does not give much importance if that

product

is having ingredients, which are safe for the children. So, elders of the family have to be mindful whenever they are purchasing any

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for their kids with regards to the contents of the

product

. In conclusion, nowadays marketing of the products related to kids

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having

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remendous negative impact on the kids and their parents. They are not only spoiling the health of the kids

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but are

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effecting

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budget planning of the family, so

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ads have to be

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completely. The caretakers of the children have to think wisely spend appropriately while buying

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related to their kids, as it would be of no use after a while or it could affect

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ell-being of the kids.