Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own or experience.

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Some group of people believe that more reasonable to adapted to a new form of climate than to try to prevent changes.I totally disagree with that statement because of timelessness. In

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, in modern reality,people can not find a way to live with it because the changes will connect not only necessary sources

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as food and but

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with the level of the ocean on the planet.

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, all countries which bordered by the ocean will be flooded.

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, according to the temperature during the

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decade, the level of ocean claimed because of the melting of ice in Antarctica. No one of countries does not ready to face

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disaster.

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, the climate on our planet change too fast.

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, creatures have notability for preparing and adaptation.

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,it will be the main reason for unreturnable consequences as the extinction of kind of animals and plants. That process will destroy the food chain and balance in nature.

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why the risks of global starvation will only increase.

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, every year more than 2 species of animals disappear due yo action of a human. To sum up, I believe that it is impossible to be ready for those changes in a short time. The reason for that with relevant examples and explanations was demonstrated before.

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Word Count

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

227 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

climate change
prevent
adaptation
mitigation
cope with
effects
shift
mindset
lifestyle
balance
invest
research
technology
crucial
education
awareness

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Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own or experience.

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The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, an make comparisons where relevant.

The government’s investment in arts, music, and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and town, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?

In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.