Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Most
of
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p
eople can not do anything to develop the ecological level, while the state and big corporations can do it. I completely disagree with Add an article
the
this
statement, because every person have a chance to improve the environment and there is depend on i
ndividual's attitude towards Add an article
the
an
ecology
.
There is no doubt that every individual in our life can helps
to develop the environmentChange the verb form
help
,
because if a person Remove the comma
apply
want
to do something for improving Change the verb form
wants
ecology
, he/she will do it without any issues. For example
, two years ago Kazakh volunteers involved in one group and the ,
ain purpose of their project was Remove the comma
apply
i
mprove our country from some trash and Add the particle
to
rubish
, and Correct your spelling
rubbish
noone
can not stop them. Correct your spelling
no one
In addition
, the state and huge companies as well, give plentiful helps
in Change the wording
help
bits of help
such
problems. For example
, approximately in each developed country everywhere we can find different types of garbage bins, such
as bins for plastic, glass, paper and others
wastes.
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other
Moreover
, plentiful numbers of countries directly work with their citizens, to improve the ecologic level. For instance
, F
rench government made a low, which can greatly develop the environment, because in that law Add an article
the
goverment
said that if individuals hand over rubbish, they will earn some money from the state. Correct your spelling
government
Additionally
, every individual has the chance to develop his or her living place. As we can see today by the developing of a lot of industries our world has some new global issues, and one of them is e
nvironmental problem. Add an article
an
However
, nowadays people know that it can lead to a lot of harmfeull
effects and they start to organise some events, which are considerate to develop Correct your spelling
harmful
ecology
.
To sum up, I completely disagree that only government and lagre
corporations can solve Correct your spelling
large
the
environmental issuesRemove the article
apply
,
because every person has a chance to develop our planet's Remove the comma
apply
ecology
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