Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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eople can not do anything to develop the ecological level, while the state and big corporations can do it. I completely disagree with
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statement, because every person have a chance to improve the environment and there is depend on
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ndividual's attitude towards
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to develop the environment
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to do something for improving
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ain purpose of their project was
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mprove our country from some trash and
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can not stop them.
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, the state and huge companies as well, give plentiful
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wastes.
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, plentiful numbers of countries directly work with their citizens, to improve the ecologic level.
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rench government made a low, which can greatly develop the environment, because in that law
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said that if individuals hand over rubbish, they will earn some money from the state.
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, every individual has the chance to develop his or her living place. As we can see today by the developing of a lot of industries our world has some new global issues, and one of them is
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nvironmental problem.
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, nowadays people know that it can lead to a lot of
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effects and they start to organise some events, which are considerate to develop
ecology
. To sum up, I completely disagree that only government and
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corporations can solve
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environmental issues
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because every person has a chance to develop our planet's
ecology
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