Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today's time, human activities are having a dramatic effect on
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our planet and some people think that rather than taking
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to prevent
climate
change, we should learn to live with it. I firmly disagree with
this
opinion and in
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I will provide certain
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to back my argument. These days, the carbon dioxide levels in the atmosphere are at
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highest
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since
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the past
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of years.
This
has caused many problems.
For instance
, people who live in polluted cities have difficulty
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breathing, low fertility
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, lower life expectancy among infants and much more. All
this
combined with global warming and
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pollution has made it extremely difficult for nature to maintain
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equilibrium
configration
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configuration
.
This
all
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to drastic
changes
in our planet's
climate
and can
also
cause many natural habitats to go extinct. Under
such
circumstances, only us humans will be able to adapt to
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climate
changes
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, but not other species.
For example
, consider the case of fishes. The continuous increase of
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greenhouse gases in the atmosphere has led to the vapourisation of polar ice caps.
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has
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to an increase in
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sea levels around the world. In
such
circumstances, the amount of human waste deposition into the sea and oceans around the world has
also
increased which has led to the deaths of countless fishes in these waters.
Moreover
, in some instances, these fishes were found to be dead on the shore of beaches and some
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to be floating dead on the surface of the water.
This
is just one of the few examples that goes on to show, that
although
humans will be able to adapt to all the
climate
changes
and find a way to live with these
changes
,
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of the animal kingdom population won't be able to do the same. So in a nutshell,
instead
of finding a way to live with the changing
climate
, one should
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for ways to minimize it. By doing so, we won't only be saving our own natural habitat, but we will
also
be creating a more stable and livable
enviorment
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environment
for the future
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • climate change
  • prevent
  • adaptation
  • mitigation
  • cope with
  • effects
  • shift
  • mindset
  • lifestyle
  • balance
  • invest
  • research
  • technology
  • crucial
  • education
  • awareness
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