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some parents worried about increasing level of violence in T.V, video games and other types entertainment for children leisure. how does this affect children . how do you think problem can be tackled?

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Nowadays, children are facing more often the
violence
 on TV, videogames and other types of entertainment. Since
this
 kind of content is becoming always more available online, children are more exposed and should be protected.
First
 of all, recent studies suggest that children that are exposed to
violence
 in a younger age have more chances to accept the
violence
 as something normal and, for
this
 reason
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they tend to develop mental illness .
As a result
, they will try to solve
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iffuclt situation with the help of
violence
, or they could think about commit a crime or even a murder. To tackle
this
 problem the government should take measures in order to protect and obscure the
violence
 to the younger children. One of the solutions could be to impose a minimum age required in order to access any content where
violence
 is shown,
also
 by introducing specific courses in school, where students can talk about
violence
. By doing
this
 children can be prepared to the
violence
 and even if they are exposed to
violence
 in any type of entertainment they will know
that is
 something that they should not reply.
Furthermore
, parents have a fundamental role as they are required to teach to their children how to relate with
violence
 in their younger years. The
first
 education comes from the parents so governments can only try to help families to reach
this
 gold, but they cannot act as a primary source of teaching. In conclusion, I strongly believe that all the
violence
that is
 always more often shown on different types of entertainment for kids,
such
 as TV shows, videogames and graphic novels, have a huge negative impact on children and governments among with parents of the children should act in order to teach and gave a proper knowledge about
violence
.
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