Although many people value their public parks, this space could be used other purpose such as residential areas for over growing population or to develop business and boost economics. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

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not enough space due to

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population.Some people believe that public area

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as parks should be replaced by the building ex. the condo which can help to expand economics.Personally,I strongly disagree with

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should be prevented is it is the place for people to chill out.When people get anxious with their work,they usually go to the public

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for relaxing.

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,there are many trees and

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green areas for people to have a

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with their family.

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it can be noticed that it gains a lot of good emotions to them.

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there are various in the

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for people to select.People always go to hang out with their friends in the

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ery cosy and peaceful place.

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,another reason is it can reduce the number of pollution significantly comparing with the residential building.Most

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fresh air so the

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is the best alternative ways for people to opt.

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period of time people usually care about their healths.

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when we have

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public parking ,it can release O2 from

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our body will become fit and healthy by having the

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instead

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of the building.

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zero countries.People try to save the

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and separate the residential area too far away from the

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.After that when it worked, the percentage of pollution declined rapidly.

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causes their citizens to  become healthy. In conclusion,

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is the most essential for people.It provides people to have a good feeling.

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,it can help people to get fit by dropping the proportion of pollution.