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A number of tertiary courses require students to undertake a period of unpaid work at art institution or organisation as part of their program. what are the advantages and disadvantages of the type of course requirement? give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge.

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Volunteering working for the esteemed companies by the teenagers as a part of their academic curriculum is a
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 situation for everyone. Since, in
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 bag of both boon and bane, merits
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 the demerits. On the constructive part, working as an intern gives
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lethora of benefits to an employee.
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the apprentice will get exclusive exposure to the real work culture and can earn
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experience which will add many feathers to the curriculum vital of the employee.
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, one can reap benefits by creating a network with professionals in the field. Since
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nternship provides an opportunity to work with employees with huge success and with those people who can be future colleges as well.
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, it the best time for a trainee to refine
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 capabilities with the mistakes
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 during the training period and boost himself with great confidence and better efficiency.
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