Some people think that in order to produce a happy society, it is necessary to ensure that there is only a small difference between the earnings of the richest and poorest. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is said that the reduction of a salary gap between affluent and destitute citizens probably generates

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of the whole

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. Personally, I opine that

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happiness

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tend

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to depend on

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adequate

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measures,

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as ensuring the compliance of taxes for different categories of citizens and proving the availability of

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public facilities. It is irrefutable that taxes are the main source of the

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funds,

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, an imposed financial burden ought to be correlated with people’ earnings.

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, having different sizes of income, individuals are believed to have different mandatory fees tailored

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them.

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, the richest are able to pay higher taxes, whereas the poorest should have minimal tax rates. Not only can

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measure equalize rights of all

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members, but it

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prevents families with

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ough economic condition to be below the poverty line.

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, by having fair tax rates,

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democracy and respect for human rights may flourish, lifting positive vibes of

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. Another point to consider is that the development and maintenance

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basic common facilities for dwellers are known to contribute to the level of

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of

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. The

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should pay undivided attention to equal social and education benefits for all types of citizens, by providing free quality education and medical services. For

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reason, the

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must

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subsidise more funds,

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, in building new health care departments, expanding the list of available medical assistance with more modern technological advancements, and allocate more money for

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loans, grants and work studies. According to the results of one social survey published on The Guardian site, a large number of citizens usually take into account the dearth of effective free health care and education availability as the hindrance for

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appiness of their life in the modern

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. In conclusion, I am convinced that a wage difference between rich and poor citizens

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to be not the major obstacle on the way of providing a happy

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;

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the

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not ought to turn a blind eye to crucial aspects of

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well-being,

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as the introduction of

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air tax system and generation of

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ull gamut of social and educational benefits.