Some people think that in order to produce a happy society, it is necessary to ensure that there is only a small difference between the earnings of the richest and poorest. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is said that the reduction of a salary gap between affluent and destitute citizens probably generates
happiness
of the whole
society
. Personally, I opine that
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society
happiness
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to depend on
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adequate
government
measures,
such
as ensuring the compliance of taxes for different categories of citizens and proving the availability of
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public facilities. It is irrefutable that taxes are the main source of the
government
funds,
however
, an imposed financial burden ought to be correlated with people’ earnings.
In particular
, having different sizes of income, individuals are believed to have different mandatory fees tailored
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them.
For example
, the richest are able to pay higher taxes, whereas the poorest should have minimal tax rates. Not only can
this
measure equalize rights of all
society
members, but it
also
prevents families with
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ough economic condition to be below the poverty line.
As a result
, by having fair tax rates,
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democracy and respect for human rights may flourish, lifting positive vibes of
society
. Another point to consider is that the development and maintenance
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basic common facilities for dwellers are known to contribute to the level of
happiness
of
society
. The
government
should pay undivided attention to equal social and education benefits for all types of citizens, by providing free quality education and medical services. For
this
reason, the
government
must
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subsidise more funds,
for instance
, in building new health care departments, expanding the list of available medical assistance with more modern technological advancements, and allocate more money for
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loans, grants and work studies. According to the results of one social survey published on The Guardian site, a large number of citizens usually take into account the dearth of effective free health care and education availability as the hindrance for
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appiness of their life in the modern
society
. In conclusion, I am convinced that a wage difference between rich and poor citizens
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to be not the major obstacle on the way of providing a happy
society
;
hence
the
government
not ought to turn a blind eye to crucial aspects of
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well-being,
such
as the introduction of
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air tax system and generation of
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ull gamut of social and educational benefits.
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