There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home. This is because the computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Working or studying from
home
is becoming increasingly common nowadays because
the
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computer technology is much more easily accessible and cheaper.
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home
but why As far as I concerned, the advantages of working or studying from
home
outweigh its disadvantages. Some people think that
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main disadvantage of working or studying from
home
is that people might be distracted easily when they are working or studying from their own places. People are always on their phone because of the wide choice of online entertainment.
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, a recent survey reveals that students studying online are likely to do another thing
that is
not related to their
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while having online courses.
As a result
, these people have reasons to believe that people might be less productive when they are working or studying from
home
.
However
, there are many advantages
of
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online working or studying.
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,
Therefore
, In conclusion, more and more people tend to work or study from
home
.
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of working or studying from
home
. In my opinion,
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