These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behavior. Do you agree or disagree?
The noun phrase Television program seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The noun phrase movie seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that the form of the verb notice does not work with was in this sentence.
The verb causes after the modal verb may does not appear to be in the correct form. Consider changing the verb form.
The spelling of behavior is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
The word assay doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The word disscuse is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase furthermore. Consider adding a comma.
The word befor is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.
It appears that an article is missing before the word wrong. Consider adding the article.
It appears that the verb help should be in the to-infinitive form. Consider adding the word to.
The noun phrase bad person seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb impact. Consider changing it.
The word Television doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.
The word onfused is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.
The word ront is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.