These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behavior. Do you agree or disagree?

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elevision program or in
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more in these days, which may
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the bad reflect in children's
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the side effects and provide my opinion.
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, the children should be observed by their parents when regarding watching the Television,
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we should see with our kids what they watch.
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play it without being in the same room watching what her baby see.
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let her baby see it, to be sure if it was good enough or not.
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, some serial show tries to be so good, optimistic and healthy at the beginning
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start to present some violence seeing, which may be effective in the minds of kids.
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rong way, or the bad person as unlucky one and start
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help the baby be in the side of
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ad person and sad to him. Some kids really
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by what they seeing, they spend a lot of time in front of a
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screen watching the big and huge mixing between good and bad, right and false which result in the
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vision of the children thinking. In conclusion, I disagree to show or present any of violence in any kind of action, and we take the responsibility for what our kids watching, and support them to be not a victim in the
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