The exploration and development of safe alternatives to fossil fuels should be the most important global priority today. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

fossil fuels consumption has been increasing day by day and
that is
giving detrimental impacts on living organisms. There should be some options available to diminish the usage of fossil fuels, namely solar
energy
, natural gas
instead
of petrol or dispel .
This
essay will discuss the need for searching for alternatives and what positive effect it has on the future
environment
.
Firstly
, increasing use of fossil fuels has caused
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lobal warming effect from the by-products of its usage, like carbon dioxide, sulfide.
This
type of products
consider
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as
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hazardous gas which would negatively affect human health and the
environment
.
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, the SA pollution management department did a
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and revealed that 50% of
the
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climate change is because of
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fossil fuels consumption.
Secondly
, there are a few alternatives that have been found by the researchers,
such
as solar
energy
, which could be used in the place of electric
energy
that runs on fossil fuels.
This
would reduce the requirement of fossil fuels and ultimately, there will be less amount of
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forms that damage the
environment
.
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,
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ndian government has introduced wind
energy
for electricity generation and
this
has declined the damage to the
environment
. In conclusion, it is mandatory to find the alternatives as environmental changes
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happening to
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xtreme level which may cost the lives of living organisms.
However
, it would take some time to search, until
then
every individual have to be cautious.
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