In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.

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there is no doubt that life expectancy has been growing in recent years, It is important to consider the

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that it might cause on society and individuals. In

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I will explore some of the problems and propose some solutions to minimize the bad effects.

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, one

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is the increased rate of retirees in society. It happens because most of the

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will be

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we will have more retirees than employed.

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is a

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because It reduces the income of the

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and increases the expenses,

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might cause a break in the economy. To solve

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, the

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should maximize the age of retirement and give more opportunity for young people.

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, another

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is the lifestyle for individuals. The reason for

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is that ageing people are more accommodated in life and tend to be in their own comfort at home.

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is a

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because we will have less attractive for young people and It might make them less eager to go out , make new friends and have a nice lifestyle. As a solution, the

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might invest in

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young people to balance the ageing

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. To illustrate, Canada is a country with most

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the

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elderly

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there make opportunities for young foreign immigrate and make Canada more attractive to live. To sum up, the increased average life expectancy can bring some problems to the

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and society.

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, It must require some investment from the

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to minimize the bad effect,

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as, raise the age for retirement and invest in attractive to make the lifestyle interesting for young people.