Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like? What its contents were

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Dear Sir, I am writing to you to report

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lost property. It seems that I left my luggage on one of your flights.

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Wednesday

, November 1st, I flew from London to Vancouver on LB123 and took my luggage with me. I put it in the overhead bin, but

unfortunately

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after the long

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I must have forgotten it on the plane. It is a blue hand large size baggage on wheels. It has one outside pocket with a small lock. A heavy stainless steel handle is

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attached

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it. I had some valuable

jeweleries

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jewelries

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including two diamond rings and a

blacelet

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bracelet

in it.

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, some of my official papers and outfits were inside. As you can imagine, these ornaments and official documents are very important for me. I would request you to write a lost report regarding

this

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it as soon as possible. Please inform me immediately if you get it and mail it to my return address. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Taslima

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