Many students around the world don’t choose science subjects at university. Give the reasons for this and describe the impact on the community?

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Nowadays, it is noticed that the majority of pupils are chosen commerce and arts subject for professional studies

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courses. There are various reasons for not selecting

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subjects in professional academics that

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affect societies in a negative way.

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, all around the globe, the students are not taking a

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-related subject in their higher education like biology, chemistry and so on. Usually,

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courses are costly than general subjects, because those courses required extra training and practical education as well.

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, other subjects do not need any special training for their future.

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, doctors required 1-year training in any hospital than they get their degree and license

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, it is very difficult to find a job for

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students because they are bond in their field but other students will get jobs without any hustle. On the flip side, there are numerous impacts of choosing art and commerce related field on our society.

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will face a shortage of doctors and other paramedical staff.

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, the rate of diseases and deaths increase in a very short time span. To illustrate, the

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faces new diseases by new germs and bacteria and which causes of various disease.

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, the

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face coronavirus which hits human health badly and

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people are died due to

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virus. After spreading

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virus the whole

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faces a shortage of doctors and paramedical staff. To summarize,

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scenario is very serious for every nation and the future of the

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. The governments should encourage the youth for taking interest in

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subjects and make their career in the

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field.

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