In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?

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. Do not just use the web or blogs or Wiki (another article is coming on how to use Wikipedia). Make sure the people you review are properly certified in their field, ideally with published work and a PhD in that area.

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section must be well referenced with accurate footnotes and page numbers showing that you have actually looked up these scholars yourself. In a longer thesis

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you may only be able to use 100-200 words.

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

pollution control regulations
emissions
discharges
green technology incentives
environmentally friendly practices
renewable energy sources
sustainable materials
waste management policies
recycling processes
environmental monitoring
compliance with environmental standards
public awareness campaigns
environmental protection
infrastructure upgrades
modern building techniques
international environmental organizations
air and water quality management

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In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction. What measures could be taken to prevent this?

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The best way to improve health is to exercise daily. To what extend do you agree?

In schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts, while boys like science. what are the reasons for this trend and do you think this tendency should be changed?

some say that, art and drama are as important as important as other school subjects especially at the primary level. do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?