Some people prefer to travel around town by car, while others prefer public transit such as bus, train, or subway. Discuss both these positions and give your own opinion.

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It is an irrefutable fact, that people need to move from one place to another. The use of transportation to visit down town in populated cities is an important topic. The following up paragraphs will analize
this
situation.
Finally
, my personal opinion will be given.
First
, the use of automovil, every year is increasing all around the world. The reason is that traveling by car is quicker and more confortable.
Also
a saving of time.
For example
: In my city, which the density of population is high, if individuals go to town by car they will not need to waste time waiting for the bus, at the same time they have to travel with a lot of people.
This
is sometimes unconfortable.
Second
, by the other hand, using public transportation can contribuite to reduce traffic jam. Most of the ocassions, there is a problem when, in town, a lot of automoviles are going to the same place.
In addition
, cars produce air contamination, and
also
sound contamination due to the claxons. In specific hours,
for instance
when children finished their day at school, generally around 1:30 to 3:00 pm. Streets are fullfilled by cars. Making with
this
, not only traffic jam,
also
producing stress on people walking on streets, as well as the individuals who are driving their cars.
Further
more, using train, buses or subway help a lot cutting out pollution. To sum up, in my personal opinion, if we want to save our planet utilizing public transportation is a need. Eventhough, people has to make a sacrifice waiting for the buses, and sharing the trip with different people.
On the contrary
, cars do not help the planet, causing pollution due to the use of gasoline.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • comfort
  • freedom
  • privacy
  • carbon footprint
  • cost-effective
  • traffic congestion
  • alleviate
  • urban infrastructure
  • balanced approach
  • peak traffic hours
  • commute
  • personal preference
  • lifestyle
  • sustainable transportation
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