Today, more and more students are deciding to move to another country to further their studies Do you think this is a good Idea

In present most of the students are moving abroad for their higher studies.Due to lack of
oppourtunity
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opportunity
and infrastructure in their home nation
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many
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freshman
freshmen
freshmans
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freshmen
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are migrating to
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ifferent country for
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education. In my opinion
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this
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ood idea as they tend to experience multiple culture ,languages and life lessons. Many
third
world developing nations have poor facilities and curriculum in their universities for
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and
phd
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PhD
courses.Developed countries have great research labs
moreover
they
also
provide scholarship for
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nternational student which attracts
undergradutes
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undergraduates
for their higher degree program.
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MIT university in the USA is doing research for most amazing upcoming technologies,
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reatest infra,
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they
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provide 50% scholarship for talented students worldwide. It is
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etter idea to move to different land for upcoming eduction if you are
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undergraduate or even a high school student . We learn
alot
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a lot
by living in different
enviornment
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environment
environments
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food,culture , language , weather is
incompatiable
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incompatible
from home ones.
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a person moving from
india
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to
U
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SA need to adjust to cultural appropriation , food and harsh winter weather of united states which he
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usually experience in
india
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.
Journey
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The journey
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from flight to landing to spending entire 2 academic years for
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or
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PhD
changes
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individual's life . In conclusion, No. of students going abroad is inclining year by year due to less educational schools/university with good equipment for higher studies in
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ome country .A person
live
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changes when they study from outside as they undergo many hardship and hurdles to adjust to another nations eating habits,speaking
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anguage and climate conditions,which benefits ones entire career journey in many aspects.
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