Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

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century majority of people throw away
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which was bought or ordered in the stores and cafes.
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olution of
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wasting. The main reasons
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wasting
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that many people do not realize how much
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they threw away and how it impacts
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the environment. Unfortunately, there
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ery limited amount of information
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the web about negative outcomes of throwing away
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urvey in the research of the University of Cambridge students showed that most of
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espondents are not aware of how much
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they throw away
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and even they said that "it does not bother them". A possible solution to
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awareness
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roblem as
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wasting. In order to do it, most viewed TV channels and shows ought to propagandize to viewers bad
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consequences
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.
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have a part to play. Fast-
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giants like
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, KFC and etc should add
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illustrations
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azakhstan government to solve the
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consequences
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of smoking cigarettes by residents oblige cigarette producers to put images of illnesses which
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decreased several times the number of smokers. To conclude,
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people do not aware of
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mount of
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they waste and what effect on Earth does it have. In order to solve
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problem, TV
programms
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programmes
programs
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food
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producers itself ought to give information about future problems which may be caused because of
food
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wasting.
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