some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenage should focus on the subject that they are best at or that they find the most interest. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Someone argue that teenagers should concentrate on all school
subject
, while others believe that teenagers should focus on the
subject
that they are best at
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that they find the most interest. I personally believe that children must
study
all
subject
at least during the
first
years of education.
Firstly
, It's noticeable how nearly all
subject
is interconnected and linked among each other.
Moreover
, in most cases, is crucial in order to develop general knowledge and be able to understand deeper how things work to
study
all the
subject
that is
linked with that discipline.
Furthermore
, by doing
this
, children may discover new things and disciplines and be more motivated to reach their goal. To cite an example, while I was studying bank law, I was requested to
study
also
some books of pure economics, even if that was totally different from the field of
study
in law. By doing
this
, I discovered how much I like economics and similar
such
as finance and monetary politics.
In addition
, focusing on just one
subject
could lead to huge disadvantages
such
as not having enough experience to have a wide view about situations or process that are happening.
For example
, the space agency "NASA" worked for a long period of time in a huge project in order to create new technologies to farm in the space, by doing so, they focused only on technical aspects and realized that they never studied or experienced farming methods. Due to
this
issue,they were forced to call experts in those subjects that could help them solve their problems. To sum up, it would be advisable for teenagers to
study
the
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different
subject
as
this
could improve their knowledge and could be useful for their future.
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