Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood, or teaching sports to younger children).
Helping people could bring lots of benefits to the public and participants themselves. Some people might that we should include unpaid public
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as helping poor people or improving the neighbourhood. In my opinion, I totally agree with Linking Words
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idea and I think taking part in support services for the public could help high Linking Words
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students learn important things in their life and profit the Use synonyms
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On the one hand, I believe being involved in unpaid Use synonyms
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activities could both teach children some good things they should learn at their age and bring more benefits to the public. Use synonyms
Firstly
, helping people would teach children about sympathy and how to work with others as a team. Because of that, they can learn some important soft skills which help them know about connecting people or leadership. Linking Words
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, those skills and knowledge could help students be more successful in the future. Linking Words
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students have the ability to do public support services better than other ages. In fact, they have enough strength, more Use synonyms
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, some problems would occur when we do unpaid Linking Words
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as a subject. Teachers may not have enough abilities to teach and manage those activities. Use synonyms
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, we might need more training and courses for educators to provide the knowledge and experiments. Those movements would cost Linking Words
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Moreover
, those skills and knowledge which students get from helping people activities may not benefit their interests and their career at all. Linking Words
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, they would found out that those activities just wasted their Linking Words
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and their efforts which did them no good but could make them fail their classes. Use synonyms
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, some adjustments would fix those disadvantages, the same as other subjects. In fact, we need Linking Words
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for teachers to get used to the program and for students to know if they are good at it or not.
To sum up, I believe with some proper adjustment, bringing unpaid Use synonyms
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